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Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

0 posted 2007-10-05 04:56 AM

In the killing fields of a loveless life
saviours rise from out the past
to throw the bones of stimulus
to the needy underdogs.

The meat is gone but the chew on bones
a seeming sustenance
for the now tied and tethered
to the stake of ripened age.

Throw the bones! The hungry need to eat
and ‘tis now the moulting season
of a love’s most perfect fit
that can’t go on and on
without the wholesome meat.

But I trust beyond this one lifetime
the voice of love will call me thrice
and supply the manner and the means
for true essential growth.

I trust but there’s luck in the party packs
and timing in the candy
and all the way to go to the tallest tree
before a satisfied recline
in the shade of happiness!

Helen / 5 October 2007

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

1 posted 2007-10-06 01:08 PM

"But I trust beyond this one lifetime
the voice of love will call me thrice
and supply the manner and the means
for true essential growth."

Excellent write Helen.
Love this verse.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

2 posted 2007-10-06 04:37 PM

Thanks JL! I'd like to believe it will be that way because that's the lasting kind of love.
Take care!
Helen

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2007-10-06 04:43 PM

quote:
In the killing fields of a loveless life

Cynical beginning ...

only love will do and when we turn within we find those strings that tie us to the Source ...

trust, dear Helen! Impressive composition, you always dig deep.

Love,
Margherita

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

4 posted 2007-10-07 03:13 PM

REALLY ENJOYED

ARCTIC WIND

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

5 posted 2007-10-07 03:20 PM

Thanks, Marrherita and Arctic Wind, for your comments. Much appreciated.

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

6 posted 2007-10-10 12:08 PM

"tethered to the stake of ripened age"
good line. Well done.
Ida

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

7 posted 2007-10-10 01:00 PM

Thanks, Ida. It may be a good line but you don't want to live it!

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