Open Poetry #41 |
A Simple Strum Of Words |
ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
A Simple Strum Of Words A simple strum of words, unlashed my heart Just newly knit in affirmation to go on The broth of an endless simmered thought Ceaselessly pours to let go and hold close What do we fear? The melody seems as crisp as then Pulling near the farthest reaches where and when I can’t forget Though it may burn my eyes to see this clearly What makes a man reach back in time to grasp his image Three chord notes along the bridge, a pastime scrimmage A simple strum of words, unlocked without a trace Awash in the colors of a future place Playing the music by touch, feeling just as much Left softly in the dew I can’t forget You~ Copyright Kkh 10/4/07 |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
I LOVE: “A simple strum of words, unlashed my heart” AND: “What makes a man reach back in time to grasp his image(?)”; I am especially fond of the ending: “Awash in the colors of a future place Playing the music by touch, feeling just as much Left softly in the dew I can’t forget… You(!)” Applause!! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
some very beautiful lines here....Your heart is writing....Keep letting the beat go on. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
A BIG APPLUASE ! clap clap clap ! ARCTIC WIND |
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WindWalker Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218 |
WOW, this is very beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I read this again and it gives me chills that don't stop...you know, the good ones, not the negative ones... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
testing one two three four |
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lyricpoet Member
since 2005-07-16
Posts 199NY, USA |
Nice job...Great lines! |
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