Open Poetry #41 |
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I'll Be Less |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia ![]() |
Should the days become to heavy Should warmth seem hard to find Should peace be a little lost In it... keep in mind... I'll hold the sun above you; forever if I have to Take from me... just what you need Oh, I'll be less so that you can be whole Should the night be darker then before Should strength forget to hold your hand Should tears fall like the rain In it... here I stand... To remind you there is light; to share it with all my might Take my heart... the deepest part Oh, I'll be less so that you can be whole Should hope feel miles away Should courage rarely find the hour Should tomorrow seem a bit to far In it... become the flower In the garden made with love; with everything I'm made of Take my wind... to begin again Oh, I'll be less so that you can be whole ... take most of me... ... take all of me... I'll be less so that you can be whole Sauni |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
I read this Beautiful! thanks for the share. "late" |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sauni~ I LOVE it when our members return 'home'~ This is lovely ... and your new photo is just gorgeous~ Bless you dear gal~ *Huglets* ![]() ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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sim0riah Member
since 2004-09-07
Posts 253Wyoming USA |
That is the meaning of "Sacrifice" If only everyone had these thoughts just think how the world would be Very Nice Job!! Rich |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
you speak of the greatest and deepest love that there is!! beautiful write!! "Life is not measured by the breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away" |
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moondogz Member
since 2007-05-01
Posts 397Great White North |
wow, that was beautiful and very touching. moon. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
What a generous soul you reveal here, dear Saunni. Unconditional love offered in beauty. Love, Margherita |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Thank you all so very much ![]() Sauni:) |
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adagio Member
since 2005-03-19
Posts 449Marrero, La. |
sometimes my tears fall like rain too. sometimes we all need that very sweet ! adagio |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Wonderful...James |
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