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Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

0 posted 2007-10-03 10:22 PM

The Ocean Sapphire

Way deep down,
in the dark blue we desire,
Poseidon created
the beauty of the sapphire.

Crystal clear,
like the waters of heaven,
The sapphire twinkles
from tears that are frozen.

Washed away,
by the waves of the sea,
And into our world
as fine jewellery.

Have you ever wondered
how Poseidon did it?
He took the oceans power and might
and then added some moonlight.

Way deep down,
in the dark blue we desire,
Poseidon created
the beauty of the sapphire.

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

1 posted 2007-10-03 10:28 PM

I REALLY like this fine 'write'!

[and NOT just because I am a geologist and
mineralogist by original training!]

I am especially fond of the opening and closing lines!

serious applause!!

p.s.: I like this poet's choice of "P.I.P.-land"
       UserName (ID) too!

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

2 posted 2007-10-03 10:32 PM

secondhanddreampoet

WOW!, thank you
and very impressed with you!
i love to write about crystal's, gems and other minerals stuff

ARCTIC WIND

Saunni
Senior Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 1777
West Virginia

3 posted 2007-10-03 10:37 PM

Talk about Damn! Yours is awesome!

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

4 posted 2007-10-03 10:38 PM

Saunni

DAMN,

thank you GIRL!
i also really enjoy reading your poems
i look forward to more GIRL!

ARCTIC WIND

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

5 posted 2007-10-04 01:50 AM

Hi Arctic Wind,
This is definitely one of your best.
Ida

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

6 posted 2007-10-04 04:18 PM

marchmadness

thank you!

I AM HAPPY YOU ENJOYED IT!

ARCTIC WIND

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

7 posted 2007-10-04 04:46 PM

Awwwww, AW, another gem from your pen!

"He took the oceans power and might
and then added some moonlight."

~ So that's how Poseidon did it! 'Tis no wonder why I love to wear sapphires!

Love 'n Sapphire Light,

EA

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

8 posted 2007-10-04 04:48 PM

EA

why thank you!

again , i love to write about gems and stuff myself

ARCTIC WIND

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

9 posted 2007-10-04 05:43 PM

Arctic wind and ocean sapphire make a truly brilliant couple!

Enjoyed this greatly!

Love,
Margherita

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

10 posted 2007-10-05 03:38 PM

Marchmadness-

thank you so much

i am glad you think this poems is one of my best

ARCTIC WIND

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

11 posted 2007-10-05 10:57 PM

An enjoyable gem of a read!
Sapphires are beautiful, as is your poem.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

12 posted 2007-10-06 05:35 PM

Wonderful...James

LindsayP
Member Elite

since 2007-07-28

Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria

13 posted 2007-10-06 10:20 PM

Nice write Artic Wind

Lindsay

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

14 posted 2007-10-07 11:50 AM

Margherita-

I am so sorry for calling you marchmadness
i messed up in the "m" names

but thank you for your kinf response!

ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

15 posted 2007-10-07 11:51 AM

Midnitesun-

Why thank you

ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

16 posted 2007-10-07 11:51 AM

Jamesmichael-

Yet again you read my poem

thank you

ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

17 posted 2007-10-07 11:52 AM

linsday P

thank you so much-

gald you enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

18 posted 2007-10-07 12:39 PM

ahh another gem to add to my treasures...Lovely writing.

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

19 posted 2007-10-07 12:42 PM

GentilSpirit-

Thanks

i glad you are putting this in your treasures

ARCTIC WIND

latearrival
Member Ascendant

since 2003-03-21

Posts 5499
Florida

20 posted 2007-10-07 03:07 PM

Very nice. Enjoyed."late"

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

21 posted 2007-10-07 03:11 PM

Late-

thank you so much

have a great THANKSGIVING

ARCTIC WIND

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

22 posted 2007-10-07 03:22 PM

I love the ocean bathed in moonlight , I once wrote a poem titled "Beside the sapphire sea

Hope

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

23 posted 2007-10-07 03:35 PM

HopeS

why thank you!

ARCTIC WIND

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