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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Remains there is no love without you I let it get away green that once was turns brown and curls falling from tight arms doing somersaults across the yard now winter comes unready but when was I ever ready unprepared to the cold naked arms clothed still by my heart I hear your whispers and they remain to stir my soul "no darkness has ever been deep enough to extinguish my personal knowledge of love" Anne Rice |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
"and they remain to stir my soul" |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
there is no love without you I let it get away green that once was turns brown and curls falling from tight arms doing somersaults across the yard now winter comes unready but when was I ever ready unprepared to the cold naked arms clothed still by my heart I hear your whispers and they remain to stir my soul |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
You know, this one put me in a place just where my heart is also. You write of such truth and love. Sauni Sauni:) |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Who could not love you? Well done! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms slick, your love words are lovely |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"I hear your whispers and they remain to stir my soul" ~ as yours, just did, mine ...  EA |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
passing of summer into autumn? hope I'm correct, lady.  Enjoyed! "...buried way beneath the sheets |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
such sadness Helen so beautifully done |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is beautiful! I can sure relate to this one, too. |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Nice to run into you on my day off Helen. I'm believing to get back into things myself, hopefully sometime this winter. Not much time to sit around and read this year but when I saw your name I couldn't resist. Still got your slick touch I see. lucky Dale Speaking of ghosts, wouldn't you know here comes mine again... |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I love this, so perfect |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice read |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
 I love this. |
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