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Broken Dreams |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity 
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As sunshine filters through the shades I rise to meet the day Trying to forget the dreams I fought to chase away Though the daylight hours seem to drag Night soon begins to fall And I find myself alone again Facing midnights call With no one laying at my side To keep the fears at bay Or in whom I can confide Why did you go away? No one ever told me The pain would be this bad But the thought that somebody else is loving you Is what makes me really sad Are you still frightened of the thunder And to sleep without the light Do you think of me I wonder Now you have his arms to hold you tight? My soul is torn wide open My world is ripped apart All of my dreams lie broken Beside my aching heart.... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I can feel your broken heart here, dear John, welcome to PIP. Well written piece. Even through the pain love lives. Love, Margherita |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
Thanks Margherita, as an eternal optomist I also believe that love will continue to shine through, I have healed and will no doubt suffer damage again in the future but I really believe it is the daily trials we endure which sparks our creativity.... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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LadyTom Member
since 2008-02-29
Posts 353LA, CA |
The dark hurting history. now, I am glad that all is over. May you enjoy your happy life now.   Aunt Tom |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
Aunt T, I shall try my best, you should now know this to be true I hope....... |
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Earl Brinkman Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183Osaka, Japan |
You are indeed a man of talent that can move people with his words. |
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