Open Poetry #41 |
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To Catch A Tear |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines ![]() |
To Catch A Tear There are times when quiet is all one asks for. It's in the silence where energy is created, where truth rises to the top and reigns free. On the other side of night, the power is all mine, untitled days to breathe life into the past, where a smile catches a tear, and fears are traded for tomorrow. And then there is that first touch, the one that deepens the feel, leaving the want for more and the knowledge that actions... speak louder than words.~ M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." (Will Moss) |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
a fine, thoughtful, emotive 'write'! I am particularly fond of: "There are times when quiet is all one asks for. It's in the silence where energy is created, where truth rises to the top and reigns free(!)" serious applause!! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I am craving this more and more...it has become so an essential part of my life... Hip hip hooray for this poem... lovely hugs Lee J. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
when actions speak louder than words...always! hugs, Robert |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
i love that other side of night too ![]() |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Actions do speak louder than words but your words are stronger than the barrell of a cannon and just powerful. I can never have too much of you whereas my actions are too much. a good commitee can decimate communication. |
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Paul Wilson![]() ![]()
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Maureen...Great write, flows so smooth. Thanks for sharing...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Indeed, actions do speak louder, than words. |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Enjoyed, We all need a little silence in out lives so we can refresh and begin again. "late" |
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vandana![]()
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice read ![]() |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Paul spoke the words that I thought. I agree with him, M. This is a keeper. A |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
again I thank you for your kind responses~~ I never know where my thoughts will take me and I appreciate when someone enjoys something I post. ![]() M |
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