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Left to ponder
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Left to ponder |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio 
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Left to ponder like starshine on muddled water, the premature frost and daisies discarded too soon from the cradle's vase, left to ponder the heart that bloomed now flatlines, is there salvation or point to such brevity as goodbyes line the drying greenery with spring's crumpled petals, left to soften the fall. [This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (10-01-2007 10:03 AM).] |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
sometimes, an answer comes slowly... Thanx for sharing such as this. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
So good to read you Goddess. Brevity does not cut short quality...does it? You wrote this well |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Your poetry always provides points to ponder. "the heart that bloomed now flatlines," ~ I could feel that! ~ and it aches! "was there salvation or point to such brevity" ~ There is always a "point" to our experiences. We just don't always see it!  You truly are a 'goddessa poetessa'. "as goodbyes line the drying greenery with springcolored petals as if to soften the fall." ~ Yeppers! A goddessa poetessa!  Sending a loving, compassionate hug your way! May the autumn bring with it, inner peace and love your way, Linda |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
InkyOne~ 'goodbyes line the drying greenery with spring's final petals as if to soften the fall.' *sigh* ... you write it so well~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: such special lines you offer, dear Michelle. Beautiful! Love, Margherita |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Excellent! I agree with all the above. JL  Blessed are those who are generous, because they feed the poor. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Much to ponder in this fine, short 'write'! serious applause!! |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
thanks for stopping by and pondering along with me |
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cokeiq Junior Member
since 2007-08-24
Posts 27 |
Hi inkedgoddess, Left to ponder, of what – life? Meaning, struggling through making sense of puzzles that don’t fit: maybe the answer does not lie in piecing these square cardboards together, and faith with its’ illogical tendencies takes away that frown on face of idealism, and where did that come from? I think this vodka down my tummy is going to feel good! |
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