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Autonomy Failure |
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crusherdestroyer New Member
since 2007-08-20
Posts 8Indiana, USA |
red blood courses through blue veins the steady rhythm beats in my chest are our hearts not too the same? similar in certain aspects but lacking in one alone the love king in my heart sits crippled in his throne going over graphs and charts unable to comprehend what everyone else seems to share to no end a hopeless tear gleams wherein lies the rub? pain and rage too familiar but the obscurity of love slips from my gnarled fingers |
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Mr. Omniscient Member
since 2006-10-28
Posts 134 |
I like that. Well applauded. |
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PoppaLoco Member
since 2007-09-23
Posts 83EU, NL, Limburg |
I liked it very much, and yes dark, but very very familiar to most of us I think. Don't know what else to add, your story tells it all. Pops |
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