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WindWalker
Senior Member

since 2001-10-12

Posts 1218

0 posted 2007-09-29 07:09 PM

My offer of love is wild and free
as waves rolling on a shore:
will you let it drift upon
your sad and empty shore?

My tears for you are like the rain:
would you let them
wash your life of bitterness today?
My eyes are as the sun’s rays,
filled with joy in your presence:
will you let them fill your heart
with hope?

Will you let the sun and the rain
together create
your own unique rainbow?
Will you let my love
fill your dreams
with the brightest colours?
Will you let me love you?

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

1 posted 2007-09-29 07:25 PM

grand-fine poetic imaging...

[wonderful "Romantic" write]

I am especially fond of:

"My tears for you are like the rain:
would you let them
wash your life of bitterness today?"

serious, sustained applause!!

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2007-09-29 09:57 PM

What a soft and romantic write, WW.
May the acceptance of this love offer be as gracefully expressed.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

3 posted 2007-09-29 10:19 PM

Beautiful write.

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

4 posted 2007-09-30 12:43 PM

Enjoyed it, Windwalker.

Corinne
Member Ascendant

since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

5 posted 2007-09-30 02:16 PM

The word that comes to mind, reading this is: clarity.

Corinne

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

6 posted 2007-09-30 03:05 PM

WW, you truly 'dew' offer a rainbow of love.

What a tender gifting of your sweet self to another.

May a rainbow of love come your way, as well!

Love & Rainbow Light,

EA

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

7 posted 2007-10-04 09:05 AM

Love has many beautiful colors,

the title caught my eye,

bringing back a memory,

one that is refreshing,

thanks for reminding me!

~ARH

You know you're in love, when you can't fall asleep,because reality is finally better than your dream~Dr.Seuss

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2007-10-04 06:40 PM

Wonderful...James

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

9 posted 2007-10-04 07:43 PM

Came back for another 'official read' of this one!

simply superb!

continued major applause!!

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

10 posted 2007-10-05 03:04 PM

Love is like rainbow

very well said !

ARCTIC WIND

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

11 posted 2007-10-05 04:44 PM

You know you're in love, when you can't fall asleep,because reality is finally better than your dream~Dr.Seuss

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

12 posted 2007-10-14 07:48 PM

Very romantic WindWalker, Enjoyed it.
Ida

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

13 posted 2007-10-19 07:00 AM

WindWalker.. this is lovely! RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

14 posted 2007-10-19 11:46 AM

liked it

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