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Magical Emerald
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Magical Emerald |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Magical Emerald Once upon a time, Necklaces were made in several Golds, silvers, and copper until A girl came upon the magical emerald. The bright green gem Brought beauty to her eye, As she walked outside And flew to the sky so high. How can this be? This is just a gem! If anyone finds out There'll be mayhem. As she landed soft, A voice did cackle. It laughed and said, "Give it back! That is my magical emerald!" The young girl did not budge, For she knew she was evil. She held the gem tight, The light beamed like an angel. "Hurray! The witch is gone! Let's all celebrate! But still, who knows what the emerald can do!" The girl did not know what would await. Years went by, And not a witch in sight. She had what she wanted No struggle, no fight. The girl finally knew What the sparkly gem did She kept it to herself And left it, forbid. Still to this day, The mystery goes on. Emerald gem dissapered, It was very long gone. Once upon a time, Necklaces were made in several Golds, silvers, and copper until A girl came upon, the magical emerald. [This message has been edited by Artic Wind (09-29-2007 10:36 AM).] |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Enjoyed your poem Arctic Wind but I think honesty is the best policy Have a great day. Lindsay |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
A great creative spirit here.  |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
linsday P thank you, the trick of the poem is to not tell and keep the secret ARCTIC WIND |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
ThisDiamond thank so much glad you enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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PoppaLoco Member
since 2007-09-23
Posts 83EU, NL, Limburg |
Brought a big smile to me. Lovely and witty, with a big warm fairy tale feel. Pops |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"Once upon a time, Necklaces were made in several Golds, silvers, and copper until A girl came upon, the magical emerald." Great story! Love this close. JL Blessed are those who are generous, because they feed the poor. |
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Tears-of-Sanity Member
since 2007-09-05
Posts 121Kingdom Hearts |
A very nice poem.. I like it Tears of Sanity~ |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Pops thank you! i am glad you enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
JL thanks i love to write about fairy tales ARCTIC WIND |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Tears of sainty- thanks alot hope you enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Arctic Wind, your poetry is full of magic! ~ and I love magical things. I have an emerald ring that I treasure ~ and it too, is full of magic. Whenever I wear it, I become a bonnie lass dancing in fields of clover on the Emerald Isle. You're a gem!  Loving hugs 'n smiles, Earth Angel |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
WOW! thank you ea! i also enjoy reading your poems too ARCTIC WIND |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This was a wonderful story. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Smart chick- THANK YOU! SOOOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH ARCTIC WIND |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Very lovely story poem. I don't know that I could know and not tell, it takes a special sort of person to do that. Always do more than is required of you George Patton |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Kethry- thank you, I loved writing this story\poem LOL ARCTIC WIND |
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