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Open Poetry #41

Maine Woods Autumn

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07

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a 'Universalist' !

0 posted 2007-09-28 07:27 PM

  Maine Woods Autumn

    ('Appalachian trail'
      impression)

Milky-river rapids,
chaos in tumult
down staircase-granite
  ledges.

Under a deep-azurine
  sky,
flaming Fall foliage
embraces all
in Autumn’s song!

[This message has been edited by secondhanddreampoet (09-28-2007 10:10 PM).]

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

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Gaia

1 posted 2007-09-28 10:44 PM

"chaos in tumult"
I like that!

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

2 posted 2007-09-28 11:23 PM

Secondhandreampoet,
You always say so much with just a few words.
Ida

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

3 posted 2007-09-29 08:22 AM

You have captured the picture of the promise of Maine woods in autumn.
Loved this.

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

4 posted 2007-09-29 10:12 AM

Thank you, Bruce, for this autumn painting and orchestral work, making your corner of America come alive in far-off South Africa.

- Owl

PoppaLoco
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since 2007-09-23

Posts 83
EU, NL, Limburg

5 posted 2007-09-29 11:57 AM

Even when describing temporary scenes or images, your poetry carries a ring of eternity. Nature's neverending reign or something. Very powerful!
Pops

ArtSolstice
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since 2007-03-18

Posts 498

6 posted 2007-09-29 06:56 PM

Perfect imaging!

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

7 posted 2007-09-30 08:48 AM

Bruce~
I like your words-in-fall for Fall~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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