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Open Poetry #41

Maybe You Left A Clue

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2007-09-28 07:20 AM

Maybe You Left A Clue

Reasons for silence
I always start to guess
Then I began thinking
Perhaps you cared less

Not hearing from you
I wonder why obviously
No time spare I guess
Especially none for me

I continued guessing
What am I meant to do
As I tried to reach out
Still unable get through

Perhaps time will tell
In solving this mystery
Maybe you left a clue
Of which I failed to see

Hope © 2007
Poem with musc and graphic below
http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/poems/105/poem_91004952.html

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

1 posted 2007-09-28 09:32 AM

I like the mystery in this, great write.
Had me wanting to see a clue.

JL

Blessed are those who are generous, because they feed the poor.
~Proverbs 22:9 NLT

WindWalker
Senior Member

since 2001-10-12

Posts 1218

2 posted 2007-10-03 07:21 PM

I love the mystery in this too, Very fine writing!!!!!!!!!!

Saunni
Senior Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 1777
West Virginia

3 posted 2007-10-03 07:44 PM

It's been so long since I have been here and still your writing is beyond words.

LindsayP
Member Elite

since 2007-07-28

Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria

4 posted 2007-10-04 12:01 PM

Nice write Hope but never loose hope and I wish you well.

Lindsay

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