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nightmiztrez
New Member

since 2007-09-28

Posts 1

0 posted 2007-09-28 05:40 AM

The tears will fall
the soul will mourn
when your heart breaks
you feel so damned torn.

You want time away
yet you want your friends
when your heart breaks
it seems it'll never mend.

Its hard to think
tears come like rain
when your heart breaks
all you feel is the pain.

Pain has no mercy,
no conscience, no regret
when your heart breaks
its as low as you get.

Your chest will hurt
and its so hard to breathe
when your heart breaks
its even hard to see.

When your heart breaks
cry, mourn, but let it go
when your heart breaks
you'll learn to be stronger, this I know.

Rick
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia

1 posted 2007-09-28 05:51 AM

nightmiztrez, welcome to Passions my friend and what a great first post. We have all felt the heart break and with time similar feelings will come your way, but that is life hey. Rolling with the punches so they say and we will all grow stonger. I do hope you are feeling better and will share much with us over time, I for one look forward to it. Enjoyed your words and feelings here, very well done.

Rick

Ethan Halo
Senior Member

since 2000-04-28

Posts 793
on the roof again

2 posted 2007-09-29 08:28 PM

you're very right, and it's such a long road to becoming stronger. so, of course, as no stranger to heart break (is anyone?) i wish you luck.

welcome to pip!

The soul is oftentimes a battlefield where reason and judgement wage war on passion and appetite.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2007-09-30 08:47 AM

Welcome to this circle of friendship and wonderfully talented poets~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2007-09-30 09:12 PM

Nice writing...James

comoloco7
Junior Member

since 2007-09-21

Posts 31
MA

5 posted 2007-10-02 10:52 AM

loved it, i can relate to it as well. keep up the good work.

In the blood soaked battle field, bleach the bones of countless millions who in the midst of victory stopped to rest, and resting they died.

Aimster
Member Elite

since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

6 posted 2007-10-02 02:32 PM

Welcome! What a nice write you have here. This is something we ALL can relate to.

Take care,

Amy

"Life is not measured by the breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away"

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