Open Poetry #41 |
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Appalachian Autumn |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! ![]() |
Appalachian Autumn Here…where a billion years of moonlight has bathed this ancient land in Nature’s simple truths… Autumn is the ‘poetry’ that makes these mountains dance, when she comes to call, dressed in finest frost and ‘Deep-Time’ memories, rising with the sun in cool, refreshing mist and rainbow-leaves, along these southbound streams of destiny, which seek the sublime solace of an endless, silent sea. ~ [This message has been edited by secondhanddreampoet (09-28-2007 05:22 PM).] |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
What a beautiful portrait of Autumn!: "dressed in finest frost and ‘Deep-Time’ memories, rising with the sun in cool, refreshing mist and rainbow-leaves" |
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ArtSolstice Member
since 2007-03-18
Posts 498 |
You've made me homesick with this writing, Poet... I didn't think it could happen, but reading this: "Here…where a billion years of moonlight has bathed this ancient land in Nature’s simple truths… Autumn is the ‘poetry’ that makes these mountains dance," ... it was like the childrens' game of "crack the whip", suddenly bringing body and mind to a scene not visited in decades. And what a scene (!): " ‘Deep-Time’ memories, rising with the sun in cool, refreshing mist and rainbow-leaves," "streams of destiny," - the phrase lingers in my mind. Very fine write! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Wonderful descriptive writing...James |
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