Open Poetry #41 |
Desired Measurements |
ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Desired Measurements Façade of shoals and shawls accoutrements fall sly Below the surface candor of fulfillments eye Much as the oiled hands applied massage and slide Too good for legal-ease sung syrup sweet belied The more and beautiful prevails to recognize Dressed up or down along travails comprise The coral light within that beacons harbor warm Upon the surface with delight as views transform Success is not a dress worn to the prom Its quietness requires nothing more the wearer don The weight its worth attained transcends the gold A real fortune to be shared that bearers hold Dress to impress in noble measurement the sun Allow to rise not compromised those values won The depths of valor shown upon the skin as pearls Predestined shines within each wave that love unfurls Copyright Kkh 9/26/07 |
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PoppaLoco Member
since 2007-09-23
Posts 83EU, NL, Limburg |
No matter how often I read this one (and so far, it must've been quite a few times), new meaning seems to seep in. Amazed at your wordplay, too! Pops |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
You do make the reader think. Nice TD. JL Blessed are those who are generous, because they feed the poor. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hi TD "Success is not a dress worn to the prom Its quietness requires nothing more the wearer don The weight its worth" Such wisdom you wrap in your always beautiful words. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
This belongs on top Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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