Open Poetry #41 |
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Silk Lady in Dancing Shoes |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Silk Lady in Dancing Shoes "Sometimes she takes the time to tell me she is mine, melting into my arms, giving away her charms." Silk lady; as elusive as a butterfly, as mysterious as an Asian Princess, I love you, I love you. One sweet summer day silk lady called me to say, "Lets get away, I'll meet you in the morning in a Cafe they call "Far Away" in Hong Kong." I hadn't seen my silk lady for awhile and I missed her long silky hair and her perfect smile, so I said "Silk Lady I Love you, I love you." I took a redeye flight and arriving early that night, I checked into lodging and hit the nightclubs to do some dancing. At midnight, when the clubs were alive and jumping, from across the dance floor I spied the woman that sets my heart thumping. She wore a long red silky dress, Chinese style, and her long black silky hair was making my heart smile. She was wearing a mask so I couldn't see, if she was looking away or looking at me. Then she smiled, and I knew, it was my silk lady in dancing shoes. I crossed the dance floor in a strutting motion, my heart beating hard and full of emotion. We danced, we kissed, we laughed and we played, the Cafe in the morning seemed so far away. JamesLee 23September 2007 |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Nice James. JL ![]() Blessed are those who are generous, because they feed the poor. |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JamesMichael~ Thanks for the word-dance between you and your silky lady~ *Huglets* ![]() ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
oh James this is a love story woven of red silk and heartbeats |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
no doubt in MY mind...your best post ever (that I've read, anyway)!!! Loved it! jwesley |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
This is a real keeper, James. Lovely A |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I agree this is one of your best. A joy to read ... and as you would say "silky"! Love, Margherita |
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vandana![]()
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice read ![]() |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you JL, Marge, Lady, jwesley, aziza, Margherita and vandana for the wonderful responses...I appreciate you nice thoughts...James |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Beautiful poem I love slik ARCTIC WIND |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
... on more silky round ... love, Margherita ![]() |
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