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soulfulnets
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0 posted 2007-09-23 09:34 PM


Never sure what thoughts run through your head
Worry about you every night as I go to bed
Wanting to run away
Afraid of failure each day
Knowing what I feel
Hoping that you are real
Do not want to be love's fool again
Do not want to take my heart where it has been
Pain has always had a spot in my heart
Poor choices have played their part
Always willing to trust
And everything turns to dust
Wishing that I could finally be happy
Hoping that this was meant to be
Fearing that my heart will get broken
Not wanting one more of love's tokens
Just wanting to have you in my life everyday
Hoping and praying that you will stay

© Copyright 2007 Jeanette M Gabriele - All Rights Reserved
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Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
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Realm of Supernatural
1 posted 2007-09-23 09:39 PM


Beautiful poem


very romantic, i just started too, its fun huh

ARCTIC WIND

soulfulnets
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2 posted 2007-09-23 09:52 PM


Yeah, I like getting feedback on my poetry.
JamesMichael
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3 posted 2007-09-24 05:15 AM


Nice...James
Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2007-09-24 09:31 AM


Jeanette~
Welcome to this wonderful circle of poets and friends~

A caring emote from your heart~
Thanks for sharing~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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