Love Poem (Im showing it to someone special, so please comment)

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Open Poetry #41

Love Poem (Im showing it to someone special, so please comment)

Sekishu
Junior Member

since 2007-09-17

Posts 36

0 posted 2007-09-23 10:37 AM

I heard the words and time stopped
Three syllables from the lips of a girl
A girl whose very existence transforms my world
Brown orbs that I’m lost in
The eyes of an angel with dark hair
The savior of my heart
The one who melts away my fear
I’ll give you only the best from here
I love you
I’ve said it before
Though never have the words rang so true
And never did I think the words would be returned
It’s been a long road to you
And now there’s a long road for us
I’ll take you in my arms
If it gets hard, just hold on tighter
No flame has ever been brighter
For me, nobody has ever been better
Your voice brings me a smile
Butterflies in my stomach
I don’t ever want to let you go
My angel I love you
I’ve said it before
Though never have the words rang so true

spunkygirl
Junior Member

since 2007-09-18

Posts 46

1 posted 2007-09-23 12:00 PM

How very romantic, the young las she is lucky! Good Luck!

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

2 posted 2007-09-23 03:50 PM

Very ROMANTIC!

I like this poem, very much

we Newbie's are trying are best, and you are doing very well

ARCTIC WIND

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2007-09-23 03:54 PM

I think Sekishu is in love! How wonderful to find that special someone in your life.

Your angel will surely be delighted to receive such sweet words of devotion!

Wishing you both much happiness,

EA

Corinne
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since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

4 posted 2007-09-23 07:19 PM

Sekishu,

I think she'll love it. It reads like a song. Is it?

Corinne

Sekishu
Junior Member

since 2007-09-17

Posts 36

5 posted 2007-09-23 08:06 PM

No it isnt, although I could probably make it one. Too bad I cant sing or play any instruments, haha.

soulfulnets
New Member

since 2007-09-19

Posts 7

6 posted 2007-09-23 09:23 PM

This poem is so beautiful. I think she will be very happy to read this, I know I would.

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

7 posted 2007-09-23 09:54 PM

it's lovely Sekishu
you don't need music or instruments
let your heart sing it

Juju
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since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

8 posted 2007-09-23 09:58 PM

oh what a sweety

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thougts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

9 posted 2007-09-27 05:29 PM

Its nice when we are ready to love and someone calls us to love...how did it go...James

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