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Open Poetry #41

Poignant Ink

Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

0 posted 2007-09-21 08:40 PM

The laugh that dipped
Its words under the pens smirk.

With the raft of the wind,
The shiver of his fingers,
The switch of ease that
Rode his levered shoulders

He watched it strum,
As he walked, she wrote,
The footsteps got long
With each wooden row
That skinned his tears.

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

1 posted 2007-09-22 12:47 PM

nice

poem

ARCTIC WIND

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

2 posted 2007-09-24 05:59 PM

Enjoyed this talented rendering

PoppaLoco
Member

since 2007-09-23

Posts 83
EU, NL, Limburg

3 posted 2007-09-24 06:30 PM

I feel silly, I wish I could understand it deeper. Maybe it's because I'm sleepy, but your words reek of greatness and a deeper meaning that is beyond me. I wish I was a native speaker..

Keep writing so beautifully, I'll get it too one day =)

Pops

Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

4 posted 2007-09-25 01:15 PM

Happy you enjoyed everyone. Pops, I appreciate your compliment. Ha, I wish it was deeper than it was, thanks again.

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