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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. In a park Near the old brick Lighthouse by the sea The autumn lawn Is slowly filling in With fallen leaves There are Marble statues With faces of people I used to know Along the walk Where from the shore If one looks out far And long enough He will feel Their white ships Faintly on the horizon line Sailing toward a rising sun In the East . |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Poignant in its beauty. Love, Margherita |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
a most fine (poetically Zen) 'write'! serious applause!! |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
beautiful, I feel the white ships on the horizon line |
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DennisTheMenace Member
since 2005-09-04
Posts 240 |
I don’t know the park But I see the shadow pillar Across the leave strewn grass I don’t know those people Now pieces of stone But I know that honorable look I know the beach and shore And because of you words I know your journey |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
Thanks all, Pretty good DM Thanks again John |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I have experienced this and am tucking it away for safe-keeping. You vividly brought it all back to me with this powerful, yet simply stated, write.  EA  |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Very beautiful I love fall, in many ways, the leaves, pumpkins, and anything to do with Fall, thank you for painting a picture in mind, it was well needed ARCTIC WIND |
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