Open Poetry #41 |
christhell's candy |
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
she was honor among altars a bible woman among plastic trees with real dragons and fleas and words from the window men that hurt her heart in lovely ways and made her cry samaritan tears that often softened the sugar sides of my jaunty judah jewelry I would walk her demons on mornings while she fed her god her dreams and became enlightened on occasion to make shade for the roses from the skins of her soul's sombrero ____________ daark |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
you always leave me thinking~~ and like Marge said previously...would be a pleasure to sit across from you to pick your mind (etc...) M |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
You touch in ways that no one else can. Loved this one darkd. "In yearning for nothing, you will be free to enjoy what you do, free to see the patterns, free to hear the music in all things." |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms MMs, does that mean you want a piece of my mind? (grin) thanks lady _________ ms gs, thanks lady friend for the read |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: You are so profound in your inspiration ... your words sink always deep within! Intense! Love, Margherita |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thanks ms mar' ...a pleasure to review theology from time to time..some of the old classic art pieces |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
The depth of thought upon a written word has a ways to go to match your poetry. Always a pleasure, Sir. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sun, thank you m'lady |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"and words from the window men that hurt her heart in lovely ways" "I would walk her demons on mornings while she fed her god her dreams" really love these lines... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms suesea, am pleased that they please you thanks |
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