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Open Poetry #41

The House's Envy

Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

0 posted 2007-09-19 02:11 AM

The niche of her smile,
Her skin that unfolds
Like the curves of
An envelopes lip.

She sighs so quietly,
So softly,
Her voice faint,
As if her words
Become wrapped into memories,

As she sits dressed in black,
With the curves of her blouse
Touching her knees,
As her legs sail
Underneath the darken scene.

With her bedrooms grin,
She kneels with
Her fingers dipped
Into her hips seals,

Where her eyes seep,
Stealing her sheets colors,
She’s pieced together on the
Walls alter.

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

1 posted 2007-09-19 02:49 AM

Intriguing title and concept!

"She sighs so quietly,
So softly,
Her voice faint,
As if her words
Become wrapped into memories,"

~ I especially liked the above lines. Beautifully expressed.

Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

2 posted 2007-09-19 12:00 PM

Thanks Earth, happy you enjoyed.

Tomer

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