Open Poetry #41 |
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Stranded |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989![]() |
Yesterday slips like sand through fingers bleeding onto the ground around my feet and I try to sink my toes deeper into the warmth of it while trying to hold on to each solitary grain for just a few seconds longer so that I might feel the slipping memory, once more.. oh for just once more before it melds into the sands of time to be washed away on some moonlit tide and I shall then be left, stranded naked in my essence, with nothing but the chill left behind to remain. "In yearning for nothing, you will be free to enjoy what you do, free to see the patterns, free to hear the music in all things." |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
An intensely beautiful write, dear Donna! Perfect! Love, Margherita |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
My gawd, girl, can you ever write poetry!!! ~ and you appear to do it effortlessly! It flows, its gentle ~ it's timeless! Love to you, this late summer's day, Linda |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
Such imagery commands empathetic emotions. MoonShadow . |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
a most fine, powerful 'write'! serious appause!! |
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Charisma![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Beautiful penned!! Charisma |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Wonderful writing...James |
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