Open Poetry #41 |
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Honesty |
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StormyB Junior Member
since 2007-07-18
Posts 42Ohio Usa |
My words, they tend to paralyze, And come out some-what rude, Pre-warned, I still apologize when I appear uncouth, Intentions not to hurt my fellow man, Though the results remain the same, One thing they forgot to say about truth, Is with it might come pain. |
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Larry C![]()
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Well, they say truth hurts. But it doesn't always have to be said. Then again, we all have our flaws. Straight up write. Write some more. ![]() If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
yes, it can hurt....but sometimes it's what people need most. ![]() |
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Fairplay Member
since 2007-01-15
Posts 222England |
You know of course it's not what is said but who is saying it..... Once you are known for being honest people tend to accept that you will tell the truth. On the other hand there is a not so nice name for (esp when agreeing with those who appear to be of higher position) people who are overly nice. I errr on the not so diplomatic side and call a trout a trout Eric Lance Davies |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed your thoughts...James |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
I have always tried to remember that to me lies=fear I very rarely lie. I like me better that way. I liked this piece of poetry Ms. (I assume?) Stormy. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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StormyB Junior Member
since 2007-07-18
Posts 42Ohio Usa |
yes, Stormy is my name. I use the name Michi Shenshu in my sig at my oldest daughters suggestion. Translated it means Unknown Player. Nice to meet you. I am looking forward to seeing some of your work. |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I love this! IT (truth-telling) is an 'affliction' I am cursed with. Whenever I avoid 'truth' in order to 'protect' another it back-fires; then my conscience suffers endless bombardments and 'storms'! ![]() ![]() |
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StormyB Junior Member
since 2007-07-18
Posts 42Ohio Usa |
I know the feeling all to well. I find myself apologising alot for telling the truth. You would be suprised how many out there simply can't handle it. |
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lovergurl Member
since 2007-05-08
Posts 59va |
wow. this was very well written. I hope one day I can write as well as you did on this one. Great Job! :;:The truth shall set you free:;: even if it may hurt. hah. Becca. |
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Devious Intellectual Member
since 2006-05-08
Posts 112 |
yea exactly my problem lately, for some its good but it has its time and place. Dont wear a cock tail dress to a foot ball game ya know? |
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