Open Poetry #41 |
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The Hill |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
THE HILL It stood about 200 feet high Against the blue Idaho sky. "The Hill" seemed more like A mountain to me then, When I was a child of 9 or 1O And living in "The Project." Low income housing, 50's style, How well I remember it still. That collection of old army barracks Scattered at the foot of the hill. Most families of the project had children ....And little else Providing many playmates For my brothers and myself. I remember long, cold winters there When times were hard And the cupboard was bare. These memories seem to be Fading with time But the image of the hill Still looms large in my mind. ...A haunting spectre of childhood. I often think of that special time When all we had was a hill to climb. And I find that I'm able to recall at will Each adventure we shared When we played on the hill. Ida Werrett |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Ida~ This is WONDERFUL !! ![]() *Huglets* ![]() ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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moondogz Member
since 2007-05-01
Posts 397Great White North |
excellent flashback Ida. |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
Nice memory of that special place we hold to our hearts from childhood days. Dinah |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Very 'real', effectively emotive 'personal' (slice of life) 'write'! applause!! |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Thank you all for your kind comments. |
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