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secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

0 posted 2007-09-15 11:05 PM

  Life, Time, and Change

Break every clock
and Time will survive...
beyond the radiant mountains
that gate the clouds,
for even they are but 'passing'
like an intransient dream
  of sunbeams,
dancing wispy-mist arabesques
in an ungoverned forest,
'mid the labyrinth of Life's
   re-awakenings ...
forever formidable and pervasive
as the morning dew.

aziza
Member Elite

since 2006-07-09

Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

1 posted 2007-09-16 12:30 PM

Life, Time, and Change

Break every clock
and Time will survive...
beyond the radiant mountains
that gate the clouds,
for even they are but 'passing'
like an intransient dream
  of sunbeams,
dancing wispy-mist arabesques
in an ungoverned forest,
'mid the labyrinth of Life's
   re-awakenings ...
forever formidable and pervasive
as the morning dew.

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Ever word, every line moves me in this poem, Bruce.

It is a lovely piece of writing and it touches me deeply inside.

Thank you.
A

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2007-09-16 06:48 AM

Once again...
(and again and again)
your word imagery
is 'Hasselblad' quality.

ArtSolstice
Member

since 2007-03-18

Posts 498

3 posted 2007-09-16 01:32 PM

Now I have a new favorite poem. This is incredible !!!

[This message has been edited by ArtSolstice (09-18-2007 06:30 PM).]

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2007-09-16 04:32 PM

Enjoyed...James

ArtSolstice
Member

since 2007-03-18

Posts 498

5 posted 2007-09-18 05:07 PM

Visiting this poem to re-read again, enjoying the remarkable imagery!

Sekishu
Junior Member

since 2007-09-17

Posts 36

6 posted 2007-09-18 07:25 PM

this is perfect
i dont know how else to put it

ArtSolstice
Member

since 2007-03-18

Posts 498

7 posted 2007-09-25 08:07 PM

I am showing this poem to a friend and I wish to comment again on its many strengths and presence. We are comparing it and contrasting it to your two most recent writes. It's still a new favorite for me.

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