Open Poetry #41 |
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We Become |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
I am The moon to your sun drinking in your heat and spilling it back to you in the cold of the night. I am The wind to your trees whispering over your skin breathing in your ear touching you even when I'm not near. I am The shore to your ocean giving you a safe haven a place to rest before you go on again. I am The dawn to your night a new beginning each morning, a fresh chance to be something more this day. Apart we are different separate...alone Together we become...one |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I am The dawn to your night a new beginning each morning, a fresh chance to be something more this day. excellent ![]() |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
oh yes.... this is so delicate and lovely ![]() |
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Jaime Fradera Senior Member
since 2000-11-25
Posts 843Where no tyranny is tolerable |
Paula, you were the one who got me started, helped me get a foot in the door into this cool pips thing. Remember? Love you me, J |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Not haveing these thoughts we are one...having these thoughts we fuel for desire for two....James |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
This write has such a peaceful sureness to it. I especially love: The wind to your trees whispering over your skin breathing in your ear touching you even when I'm not near. Wonderful! |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
Apart we are different separate...alone Together we become...one Wonderful ending to a lovely romantic write. Thank you for sharing this beauty. MoonShadow . |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
You are beautiful in all that you share here. Lovely, Paula. A |
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