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nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2007-09-13 08:51 AM

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I know he's there in the background
pushing a little each day,
but the mind and the eye that sustains one
is soon blinded by words of "heard say".

The silence of feeling is dream-edged,
remembrance a thing of the past,
and under the bed are the ghosts that still haunt
always leaving sweet taste of the last.

I'm costumed pretending the yesterday
surrounded by life and its spin,
while drinking the want of tomorrow
when today is the lost held within.

I answer myself in the mornings,
each sunrise a garden of new.
I watch as the clouds become funneled,
for a peace that will come raining through.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

Bronzeage
Member

since 2007-07-20

Posts 197

1 posted 2007-09-13 10:30 AM

Intriguing piece. Very well done

Type II poet. Its worth the work.

MoonShadow
Senior Member

since 2001-08-02

Posts 943
Dark side of the Moon.

2 posted 2007-09-13 02:21 PM

Much enjoyed, Maureen... thank you for sharing.

MoonShadow
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JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2007-09-13 04:24 PM

Nice flow of words...James

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

4 posted 2007-09-13 06:45 PM

Interesting ‘write’!

I particularly like:

“The silence of feeling is dream-edged,
remembrance a thing of the past…”;

“surrounded by life and its spin…”;

AND:

“each sunrise a garden of new”

Applause!

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

5 posted 2007-09-14 06:39 AM

Thank you, all~~

besides whatever else is going on (or not) in my life, I work at the MD Renaissance Faire during these 2 months and dress up,
giving me a chance to masquerade and live in another time every weekend.

M

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2007-09-14 05:38 PM

MzBlissfulLady~

WONDERFUL !!!

And ... I know how much you enjoy the costuming days~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

7 posted 2007-09-15 11:16 AM

Excellent write.

JL

Blessed are those who are generous, because they feed the poor.
~Proverbs 22:9 NLT

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