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You Could Have Me |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart 
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You could have, all my words, if you wanted them, You could have, all my love, if you wanted it, You could have me, all of me, all you have to do, is show me..... "You know you're in love, when you can't fall asleep,because reality is finally better than your dream"~Dr.Seuss |
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Bronzeage Member
since 2007-07-20
Posts 197 |
A proposition no man could refuse. Very nice. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Sounds like you have chosen a favorite...James |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Bronz~I hope so...LOL Thank you! You know you're in love, when you can't fall asleep,because reality is finally better than your dream~Dr.Seuss |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
JM~No...I have chosen...Just put my words out there! Hopefully I would be someones favorite someday! Thank You! You know you're in love, when you can't fall asleep,because reality is finally better than your dream~Dr.Seuss |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
Makes one wonder, where does the line form. surely there is a long one. Wonderful write, Milly. Got my attention. MoonShadow . |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Oh Mr. Moon...there you are....I guess my aim hit the mark  glad to have caught your attention...now for the rest...hmmmm You know you're in love, when you can't fall asleep,because reality is finally better than your dream~Dr.Seuss |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
 You know you're in love, when you can't fall asleep,because reality is finally better than your dream~Dr.Seuss |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read  |
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Chosen one Junior Member
since 2007-09-13
Posts 29 |
ARH, many readers these days look for the passions in poetry. but you are the tree which holds strong and high, you are the melody in which a song plays, you are the passions in poetry. again, what warmful poem. as i am working on making my website i wont be on as much for long time. i maybe peek in once in a while. your poem`s made me want to stay and hold back my webiste for just a bit longer! hugs and smiles Chosen One! |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Chosen one..to what do I owe such honor bestowed upon me with the beauty of your compliments, I am humbled....Thank you so much! come and peek as much as you like! Hugs~ARH You know you're in love, when you can't fall asleep,because reality is finally better than your dream~Dr.Seuss |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
vandana..thank you hun! You know you're in love, when you can't fall asleep,because reality is finally better than your dream~Dr.Seuss |
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Chosen one Junior Member
since 2007-09-13
Posts 29 |
ARH, i wish to bring you higher than others you have inspired me to write my first poem today. I simply enjoy your poetry and i am going to look back at your other poems and bring them back up for another chance. a chance to shine and become the true passionate poetry that it really is. i love your poetry. i will dedicate a poem to you. i will notify you when i do post it. with all the hugs and smiles Chosen one |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
absolutely beautiful... |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
...you always have, and will always be someone's favorite, my friend...even if from afar. j. |
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Jaime Fradera Senior Member
since 2000-11-25
Posts 843Where no tyranny is tolerable |
... Take me ... and I'll be gentle ... |
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paradise islands New Member
since 2007-09-15
Posts 9 |
a romantic heart- yes, this poem is beautiful, when i last joined here, my name was "sweet heart", but i left because i moved to California, i remember reading one of your poems. i still remember your a beatiful poet congrats sincerely paradise islands |
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