Open Poetry #41 |
You Are |
MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
"You are..." You’re the air that I breathe that lets me live so free. You’re the joy within my soul that lets me just be me. You’re the beauty that inspires and predicates my art. You’re the passion flame that melts my loving heart. You’re the starshine glow that fills my every dream. You’re the guiding light, perfection so it seems. You’re the treasured soul, all that I adore. You’re the gift divine, all I need and more. MoonShadow |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
All a part of what we wish to see, to feel to hold and touch...excellent thoughts. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
once again...most fine 'Romanticism'! [a joy to read!] applause!! |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Kenneth, It seems it can't get better than this. A lovely romantic write. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"You’re the treasured soul, all that I adore. You’re the gift divine, all I need and more." wow that is beyond sweet...loved this |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
One of your finest romantic writes...James |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
I was pretending my boyfriend was serenading me with these sweet romantic words If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
Magnus, Bruce, Larry, SEA and James... Thank you so much for your read and kind words. Always good to hear you enjoyed. Ceinwyn... imagine the response if you were to say the same words to him. Thank you for the response, glad you enjoyed. MoonShadow . |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
and you are possibly the most romantic man in the world gentle MoonShadow beautiful... |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"You’re the joy within my soul that lets me just be me." Lovely! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
well, I know I read this earlier...thought I replied but I didn't beautiful romantic write Ken gives me back a little faith in men these days |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
...nothing can be bad about a write that returns a little faith....much enjoyed my friend... jwesley |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
Vandana - Thank you for the read and kind response. Kate- I fear that I am hopelessly cursed so, Milady, a condition that I am powerless to cure. Midnightsun - Glad you enjoyed. Dixie - Faith breeds hope... both of which we could all use a little of. Thank you for your response. JWesley - Thank you for your kind words. MoonShadow . |
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