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Gossamer Wings
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Gossamer Wings |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Gossamer Wings Chasing images of my mind Through all the terraces I find Through the bevels of bedevil Through my hearts subsonic level Can you feel the theme of my dream? Can you hear the deem of the scream? Can you brew the wet of the dew? Hear the coo of the forming new. Place your face to face my time Can you hear the bells that chime? Can you feel the pace of the chase? Can you find the door of the place? These are the trasses of alas These are the Sodom’s of the pass This is the substance of my ID This is the fire in the grid These, the phantoms that fly my sky Are the gossamer wings, of why |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Ohhhhh .... now look at all that wonderful internal rhyming going on here!  You've given this rhyme admirer a real treat, Sy.  Perfect timing for a read with my afternoon tea! Thinking about you and hoping all is well.  Best wishes and big hugs, /Kit |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Mr. T.!!! ~ What a fine day this is turning out to be! Our resident sonneteer ~ and friend! ~ is back! Now don't you go tuckering yourself out replying to your FANS ~ of which I am one! You just take it easy and use your energy for healing ~ and writing!  Yes, I can feel the theme of your dream and the coo of the forming new! ~ and they are lovely to behold! Giving you a humongous angel hug and kiss, EA |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
It is good to see you here today poet friend and with such lovely verse you touch us softly. after a fall I get back up, |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
it's sweet to see your face Sir Sy and your words make it sweeter |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Place your face to face my time ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ oh my darlin Sy-guy... you get extra winkies for that line.     |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Can you hear the deem of the scream? Sure can  Always happy to read your words, Sy  M |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
It is so good to see you writing and posting, again. We have missed you and you wonderful poems. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Thanx Sir Sy for a uniquely crafted poem. Nice Job....Hope you are still doing well, your words brighten our days....... |
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