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HopeS
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2007-09-10 09:06 AM

Before Time Slips Away

While the time ticks away
Through joy and sorrow
If you knew me yesterday
Remember me tomorrow

Through the darkest night
Into the brand new day
Remember I always care
The same as yesterday

We cannot turn back time
Its all too quickly gone
Fond memories I cherish
Remembering each one

As we journey through life
Remember day to day
Keep those dreams alive
Before time slips away

Hope©2007

© Copyright 2007 HopeS - All Rights Reserved

Snowflake From Hell
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since 2003-07-10

Posts 777
My own little Icey Oblivion

1 posted 2007-09-10 12:40 PM

indeed, ill have to follow that bit of advice

I am the little cracked mirror

SmartChick
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since 2001-09-23

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On A Journey To The Unknown

2 posted 2007-09-10 01:11 PM

Beautiful and very inspirational.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2007-09-10 02:01 PM

Enjoyed...James

LindsayP
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since 2007-07-28

Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria

4 posted 2007-09-11 10:48 PM

Lovely poem, thoroughly enjoyed it.

LindsayP

Tears-of-Sanity
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Kingdom Hearts

5 posted 2007-09-12 12:46 PM

That was nice... I liked it ^^'

Tears of Sanity~

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2007-09-13 07:54 AM

Hope~

'If you knew me yesterday
Remember me tomorrow'

Oh, what a LOVELY thought, dear poetess~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

7 posted 2007-09-14 09:09 PM

always timely and valuable words you weave

JL
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since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

8 posted 2007-09-17 09:15 AM

"As we journey through life
Remember day to day
Keep those dreams alive
Before time slips away"

Yes! Well said.
Great write HopeS

JL

Blessed are those who are generous, because they feed the poor.
~Proverbs 22:9 NLT

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

9 posted 2007-09-17 09:49 AM

'High' Hope!

Whenever I read a poem of yours, I come away with little gems such as the following:

"If you knew me yesterday
Remember me tomorrow"

Linda
P.S. "Keep those dreams alive
Before time slips away"

Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

10 posted 2007-09-17 03:25 PM

Very nice.

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