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Open Poetry #41

Breathe Into Me

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2007-09-09 07:41 PM

As I Lay drowning,
in memories waters,
skin becomes cold,

Abandoned my heart,
became lost, alone,
a lifeless piece of art,

Savior of my soul,
hunter of my heart,
lover of my mind,

Lay your lips,
of soft tender love,
upon these lips,

Lips of warmth,
come and breathe,
your life into me,

Allow my hollowed heart,
to be filled,
with warm loves glow,

Beating and breathing,
as you resurrect me,
so shall the dead,

come to life once more,
a heart beats alive,
pulsations from your love.

[This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (09-09-2007 08:13 PM).]

Snowflake From Hell
Senior Member

since 2003-07-10

Posts 777
My own little Icey Oblivion

1 posted 2007-09-10 12:47 PM

great write

I am the little cracked mirror

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

2 posted 2007-09-10 01:26 PM

very nice ARH....lovely

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

3 posted 2007-09-11 08:42 AM

Thank you both for your replies!

You know you're in love, when you can't fall asleep,because reality is finally better than your dream~Dr.Seuss

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2007-11-28 03:58 PM

Wonderful...may those warm lips find their way to you...James

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

5 posted 2007-11-28 05:27 PM

Lovely

ARCTIC WIND

Gumpy
Member

since 2007-11-06

Posts 143
Canada

6 posted 2007-11-28 08:06 PM

Very nice read.
Passion!

Gumpy

How is it that after your heart is ripped out, you feel so much?

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