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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace
0 posted 2007-09-09 06:31 PM


Just A Brief Statement


this time just
a brief statement
the moon choose us
phase of new tide
with waxing a halo
in moonlights dripping
precarious victory
an angel’s trumpet
he has no mold
yet can cast shadows
on the darkest night
along the curve of
the cup of his hand

"no darkness has ever been deep enough to extinguish my personal knowledge of love"  Anne Rice
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The Lady
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since 2005-12-26
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The Southwest
1 posted 2007-09-09 10:51 PM



"yet can cast shadows
on the darkest night
along the curve of
the cup of his hand"

fine as a piece of bone china Helen
and as exquisite
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since 2001-03-07
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British Columbia, Canada
2 posted 2007-09-12 11:53 PM

I would love to say that Kate took the words right out of my mouth, but I will just say I wish I had written it.  Beautiful like the poet.
Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
3 posted 2007-09-13 01:17 AM

Lunar magic at its finest.


EA
TomMark
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since 2007-07-27
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LA,CA
4 posted 2007-09-13 01:30 AM

yes, truly a fine piece.
enjoyed the beautiful expression.


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