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Open Poetry #41

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zacubus
Junior Member

since 2007-09-08

Posts 32

0 posted 2007-09-09 03:53 PM

Come into life having done nothing wrong,
but in this world it will not take long.
Young and curious without a care,
and eyes are upon you but you're unaware.
So in simple pleasures with your soul you play,
not knowing the price if you perished today.
And it will not be long until you are hooked and your lusts won't cease,
and your regrets and troubles just increase.
Soon you'll be lost and cannot cope,
unable to glimpse a little hope.
But there is someone for you who really does care,
and he hears your cries and souls despair.
Believe there is a God that loves us all,
and he is waiting for you to answer his call.

zacubus
Junior Member

since 2007-09-08

Posts 32

1 posted 2007-09-09 03:54 PM

Far from safety you roam,
and I am troubled that you may never come home.
For in the midst of danger stand you do,
and with one wrong step you could be through.
Then never again shall your face I see,
so I plead to you love return to me.
And the mistakes you have made I will forgive them all,
just ask of me child and I'll answear your call.
Then the rest you need I shall give,
and with me in paradise shall you live.
Where all troubles vanish and there is only peace,
where my great love for you shall never cease.

DennisTheMenace
Member

since 2005-09-04

Posts 240

2 posted 2007-09-09 03:56 PM

Gezzz I better check my machine

DennisTheMenace
Member

since 2005-09-04

Posts 240

3 posted 2007-09-09 03:58 PM

Golly, should we all wait for you to post to yourself agin?

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2007-09-09 04:35 PM

Nice writing...James

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