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Open Poetry #41

Whisper

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

0 posted 2007-09-08 11:50 PM

Whisper

If I was a whisper
Would you care to listen?
It will not be to loud
Just air brushing your ear

I promise I wont nag
Just tell you I love you
If I was a whisper
Would you care to listen?

Sometimes I will get scared
that I wasted my words
that you never listened
that I have to speak out
Because I'm a whisper

Juju

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thougts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

1 posted 2007-09-09 10:57 AM

Whisper-soft write, so delicately penned.

He would be a fool not to listen.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2007-09-09 06:00 PM

Nice...depends on what you want...the right man will respond to the whisper...James

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

3 posted 2007-09-09 06:35 PM

Thank you every one for reading my poem!!!! I have the video up for anyone interested. I may change the video. the music is load.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jp_5I4xMjhA

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thougts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

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