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Open Poetry #41

Do I love you?

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

0 posted 2007-09-05 09:03 PM

Do I love you?

Part of me is afraid
that you will read this poem
and take it the wrong way.
This is the curse of my feelings

If my feelings would turn...
If they became colors
that wept from my heart
You may not like what you see.

-Juju
I wanted it to be longer, but I couldn't add any more

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thougts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

1 posted 2007-09-05 09:06 PM

Juju,

If you are that afraid
then you are probably right
in your fear. If a woman can't love
with confidence what's the point?

John

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2007-09-06 05:17 AM

Nice writing...James

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2007-09-06 09:52 AM

I sense that one of the colours is a sad shade of blue...

Perhaps there is nothing left for you to write.

Hugs to you, Juju,
EA

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

4 posted 2007-09-06 10:54 AM

Your poem touches~~

You are very young and still learning "the world around you", Juju

Don't love too easily, like what you see and have in front of you first, take it as they say "one step at a time" and let it develop. There is so much more to love and loving than most ever consider, as it changes through time and will at certain moments disappoint, when we expect too much or too little.

M

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

5 posted 2007-09-07 09:40 AM

"If my feelings would turn...
If they became colors
that wept from my heart
You may not like what you see."

Profound.

JL

Blessed are those who are generous, because they feed the poor.
~Proverbs 22:9 NLT

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

6 posted 2007-09-18 09:08 AM

Thsnkyou every one

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