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Seasons Passing |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! 
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Seasons Passing Summer wanders off. The wounded toll of a broken bell lies disconsolate on the frosted ground of Autumn’s darkening. Winter comes… in frozen footsteps and chaos, as more of life ‘slips away’ like the tides, only…never to return! [This message has been edited by secondhanddreampoet (09-06-2007 08:50 AM).] |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
wow !!! a stone write - short and to the point , well done In his mantle gray he walked one day across a shining floor and with crystal key in secrecy he opened an ivory door -J.R.R. Tolkien(T.Bombadil-the adv |
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bel1e Senior Member
since 2006-07-24
Posts 1631 |
succint & well said~ ~hugs |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
A uniquely poetic view on the changing of the seasons! Perhaps a bit sombre, yet ever so beautifully penned.   Linda |
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ArtSolstice Member
since 2007-03-18
Posts 498 |
Achingly sad, Poet, and beautifully written, as always. |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
even waves has high and low, how come your poem is always top good?!! Beautiful |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
in agreement with aujussy wolf |
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