Open Poetry #41 |
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Autumn Dawn |
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Will_Rhyme New Member
since 2007-08-18
Posts 7ky, usa |
Now the night-time steals away, as timid morning swirls the floating mists, the ripened corn, the chimney smoke in curls. Dew-covered grass asparkle in the infant light. Golden leaves glide softly toward the ground, in silent flight. The Maple and the Blackoak, each catch a yellow ray... their tops explode in red and orange and shout out, "Autumn Day". |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
What a glorious Autumn dawn ~ and day! Will, I loved this sparkling little poetic gem of yours! ![]() Giving you a warm, autumnal hug, EA ![]() |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hello Will......reading the imagery in this autumn poem has helped cool me in the heat of this summer day. Thank you. |
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Will_Rhyme New Member
since 2007-08-18
Posts 7ky, usa |
Thnaks for taking time to comment. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Autumn with sentiment! Enjoyed your write. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Wonderful...James |
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aujussy wolf![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
Quality Poem !!!!!!! downright beautiful images : ) ~wolfy In his mantle gray he walked one day across a shining floor and with crystal key in secrecy he opened an ivory door -J.R.R. Tolkien(T.Bombadil-the adv |
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