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birth of a penny
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birth of a penny |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa 
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she splashed in every fountain a copperborn coin who wished to come true bloodgiven to her tiny fist from the mother ready wanting to throw herself into the rocklined wellspring fountain Youth a wish of self-- dreamheaded screaming redfaced alive pain "I am Here" accept me (wish) take me (wish) I am alive I am tiny fist I am Well I am copper coin I splash I wish |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
This is very captivating, dear Brian. Love, Margherita |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I love that you honor and value the smallest denomination....... the often ignored 'foundation' upon which all else is built |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hi Brian...I've always admired your poetry. This one is no exception. To throw a coin, to make a wish and to have it come true....makes me smile. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu! *smile*  I love this. |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Hey LOOK! I just made a copper float to the top |
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bel1e Senior Member
since 2006-07-24
Posts 1631 |
Outstanding~ I loved this~ |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
" a copperborn coin who wished to come true" My own just did...  |
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