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A Portal
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A Portal |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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A Portal Through a portals chaos lane I tried to find a path of sane I walked among the giant trees And felt the title of the breeze The grass the greenest I have seen The flowers prettiest ever been A brook of water cruse a lane Rippling in a sight of bane But shadows bit those heels of grace A garment full of woven lace An infinitesimal state of store The substance of a chaos core And in the footsteps that befell I also saw the flames of hell Consuming all that stood in kind Eating up the sane of find It was a scene of time and pour This portals store this open door |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
WELCOME HOME SY |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I hope all is well with you and yours. It's nice to read you again. This is lovely! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
DITTO< DITTO.....definitely ditto...I hope you are well, or are still on the mend and getting well. You are missed when you are away. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm *squeeze you tight* You are like oxygen! Oh lovie, I'm so happy to read you again.   ((((((((((((((((((((you)))))))))))))))))))) |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Dear Sy It is so wonderful to read you again!!!  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome home, Sy. It is so good to see your smiling face, and to read your words so graced. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Sy, It's good to see that nothing altered your heart! How lovely to see you again. Welcome back. Remember, take it easy. Writing must now become your primary activity.  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Sweet, sweet Sy ... I do believe I have been lost in this same portal myself. I'm glad you found a way back out to pen us this great poem.  I'll tell you what. If you find yourself there again, watch for me, and we'll get back out together. Best wishes and grrrreat big hugs, /Kit |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Seymour, welcome back! In this beautiful poem I find your usual mastery and a touch of paradise and one of hell. The green grass and the flowers are the goal, but it seems every now and then we get lost on sideways ... yet without the shadow zones we would never fully enjoy the sunlight. Take it easy! Love and big hugs. Margherita |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
There you are! Long time no 'sigh'! Gosh, you've certainly been missed! I am so relieved that you are staying on this side of the portal's door!!! Great to see you back! Angel hugs 'n kisses, EA [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (09-01-2007 04:37 PM).] |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
I am so glad to see you posting again. Welcome back, my friend. Hope you are feeling a whole lot better. |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
Wonderful......simply wonderful I wondered along with you till the end...and I was touched Thank you |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
glad to see you again missed your dose of youth and expertise all at once |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I felt a little sigh today, When I saw our Sy on this page, Knowing he was getting better Like fine wines also do with age. I savored a sip of his poetry It literally made me drunk! I confess I lie but at the very least, It cleared up my "Missing Seymour Funk!"  I see you are doing your mind exercises, and we sure missed you. |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
I missed you and the poetry that you share with us. Welcome back - it made my day to see you had posted. Alison |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
you were missed welcome back smoooch |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
Have a wonderful day, sir!! enjoyed your poem as always |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Seymour...Welcome home, hope all is well with you. Great poem...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ So very happy to see you grace the circle again~ Think of us as your 'treadmill' as you poeticize yourself back into shape~  Love you, we sure do, Seymour~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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ivordavies Senior Member
since 2007-01-10
Posts 739Chester, England |
And through your portal I did look to find you by a rippling brook aware of every pretty flower and flames from Hell that all devour. This portal shared like open door by Seymours poetry once more... Thank you once again Seymour for an insightful read, Ivor |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Sy Great stuff as usual........But then I've come to expect that from you. Eric |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
and it made my night to see you here Sir Sy writing beautifully as always |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Gosh it is really good to read you, Sy! Sounds like you made it back through the portal and I am glad......*big big hug*.......jo |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
Welcome home Sy... it is good to read you once again. MoonShadow . |
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