Open Poetry #41 |
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In the stars |
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ladyofthevalley New Member
since 2007-07-14
Posts 4 |
Slowly you go from me to that place that place that is special because you have arrived I will miss you and look up at the same stars that shine on you I will slowly fade away as I am lost without your light Then I will slowly return again as you come back closer Arriving just in time to save me from myself Taking me high above the stars with your sweet escape We will surrender together |
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I Love Jesus Member
since 2006-12-12
Posts 216ar. |
I liked this! It was beautiful! God bless you always, Stacey |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
truly very beautiful!!! and a warm welcome to the wonderful place. ![]() |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
very nice... welcome to the blue pages ![]() g "...Never regret anything that made you smile..." |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Oh! This is lovely. Welcome and I am so looking forward to reading more of your poetry. Alison |
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ladyofthevalley New Member
since 2007-07-14
Posts 4 |
Thank you all for such kind replies! I am smiling!! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
"We will surrender together" nice~~ WELCOME ![]() m |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions, Lady. Please, check your email for a Very Special Greeting! " It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love |
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Jenna Member
since 2007-03-20
Posts 180 |
This bought tears to my eyes. It is something that I can relate to very much so at the moment. Excellent |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a new face! ![]() welcome to Passions! I will enjoy reading your work |
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