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Triskaidekaphobia Member
since 2003-02-05
Posts 251In a state of disrepair... |
smother the world kill with old plastic and hold her down until shes drowns after we killed everything we found like a naked doll she died crying slaughter defined in everything we say fish will devour flesh we cast away the china doll looks so sad we burnt her soul in a flame today profane as pain laughter ashes into plaster over the dead skin madness in the sane looks the same as profound unless you dig deeper six feet below the ground "They will plunder all your dreams |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
this is really good writing...though the initial reaction might be to just move along because of the content...there are some great lines in this one...think it needs a bump up for a second look... |
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