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Think of The People Who Care (Corrected Version )
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Think of The People Who Care (Corrected Version ) |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia 
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Think of The People Who Care Think of all the money wasted Just so you can get high Think of the people who care They keep on asking why Had you ever stopped to think Where has the time gone While life was passing you by You closed out everyone Addiction screws your psyche Messes with your brain As you cast loved ones aside The dark side you remain It should give you time to think Whilst inside jail you sit Remember friends and family All hope and pray you quit Hope ©2007 |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Bravo  articulated well |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"It should give you time to think Whilst inside jail you sit Remember friends and family All hope and pray you quit" Excellent write!! Good advice. JL  Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed: |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Very powerful poem, Hope...I pray it gets the message across to those who have any kind of addiction...**big hugs** |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
well said Hope!! RDB |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
powerful indeed I've had friends go through it and I've been through it...it's not a pretty thing |
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