Open Poetry #40 |
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Recollections.... |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia ![]() |
Thoughts penned for my first love tragically lost. (many years passed now). Somehow I feel he likes me/urges me to write about him! ![]() I seem to miss you more these days As recollections begin to fade Of long forgotten slumber nights And sun drenched hours of delight I know I long for ways of old I know I long for laughter new But all I have are memories Filled with no goodbyes from you My heart still mourns your loss It always will.... Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... [This message has been edited by Roniece Dawson-Bruce (02-17-2007 05:50 AM).] |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
If you feel it, then it must be so. Thank you for sharing. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
thank you... that was a nice comment ![]() Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
the heart goes on writing ![]() |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
it does indeed my sweet friend Dixie.. thank you xx RDB xx Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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trutodaraiders Senior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 820CA |
sweet heartfelt poem my friend |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
So touching and heartfelt Hope |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
This is beautiful, I felt the tender heartache and longing in this, so sorry for your loss, a love you will never forget. my winged ~hugs~ ![]() Tracie Love is the life of the soul... |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Oh Roniece... so lovely and yes... he urges you to write I believe it |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
...and you do it so well... "But all I have are memories Filled with no goodbyes from you" what a charming line... |
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