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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia 
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Hey you With the smile that could melt a heart Come play with me awhile I won’t keep you long Just long enough For me to see the sparkle in your eyes Just long enough For me to feel your arms placed firm around my waist Come Let’s play before the sun sets And the chill begets us Your warmness could save me from the night And gift me sleep fit for a queen... Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... [This message has been edited by Roniece Dawson-Bruce (02-17-2007 05:00 AM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sounds like better sleep than I had last night  |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
good morning Dixie girl... thank you for your lovely comment!  RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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trutodaraiders Senior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 820CA |
It's nice to snuggle up with someone warm at night. Warm poem my friend |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
I love this. I am enjoying your poetry a lot. Thank you. A |
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Rod Member
since 1999-12-08
Posts 149Auckland New Zealand |
"And gift me sleep fit for a queen"... A queen of hearts....like you perhaps?? Well you sure deserve it after such a lovely poem. Well written. The greatest thing you can do for another is not just to share your own riches...but to reveal to him his own. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Wow! Sounds like a good plan to me. |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
"just long enough . . .", indeed! H!, Robert |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"Your warmness could save me from the night And gift me sleep fit for a queen..." OH Roniece!! |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
And I have insomnia....or it least it feels that way half the time!!!! LOL~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
May all your sleeps be sweet and befitting of you, Dear Auzzie Poet Queen!  What a lovely way to prepare for sleep!  Linda |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Roniece~ Such a lovely word-fluff for any pillow~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
thank you everyone, your comments continue to inspire me RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Like this...James |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
thank you James, appreciate you reading my work RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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