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Losing Control |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
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"I'm losing control falling by the wayside" ~People In Planes that's what they say anyway and no one has total control of anything in life anyhow so take what you can get with a humble bow they say it's okay but they really don't see they don't know what it's like to be me losing control falling by the wayside |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Ooops! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
No one can truly know what it is like to be another person, unless they have walked a mile in their moccasins. People who care about you may take the time and effort to try and understand what you may be experiencing on the inside, but as you say, no one can really know what it is like to live in your skin. Hang in there, Dixie! You have many compassionate friends here at pip. Or, m'dear, is this poem inspired by the quote? Or did the quote represent how you truly feel?  Linda |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
hoping the poem was insired by the quote or a passing feeling Dixie |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Dixie girlfriend.... noone knows until they walk in your shoes... nice write RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
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it's a song...I first heard on The Sopranos I put it on myspace http://www.myspace.com/tryintogetthere just how i feel these days |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
permit me to be so bold and pollyanna, but in your poetry, you have left enough crumbs along that wayside that you'll never be truly lost along it...you'll be found and you'll be safe...imho |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
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thank you Steaven  |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
This one is makin gme think!!! Awesome!!! ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Personally, I think your poetry is a map to your soul. So you can never be truly lost - just maybe a bit off course at times. You are such a good writer. A |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
No one truly knows how the other feels inside , but friends remain side by side Hope |
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