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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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He shook the skins that bound him tight he took a bundle from his back and dropped it sure upon the stone and pulled them crusted from his bones as he piled the pieces high gold from countries of rumor gloried by the heads of Rome and some faces were unknown but they glittered as the same he placed them on the table safe next to his broadsword... There was twine about his feet that held the fur and he brought meat freshly killed from whence he came dripping blood from off his back he offered up his bonding fee nodding, "put this prompt upon the spit" weary of the kill. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Your man may be lacking in social graces ~ but at least he brings home the bacon and puts meat on the table! lol A powerful poem!  Linda |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
grin--I don't own the man. And the fact that I don't claim ownership annoys him to no end! This one? Was for a mad viking.  Sadly, I can't take him anywhere either. *pout*The one I live with brings home beads. Happy V-Day Nance! And if you think yer confused?  thanks for reading |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Ser, what a picture....my mind's eye saw it vividly....but I loved the anaology even more. Hugs, you........jojo |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
ooh a mad viking you say? very nice read! RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Karen...Stay away from the French Quarter and Pat O'Brians. I'm confussed also...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
serenity, It's nay and O-le but still a fine day.  |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
SIGH (placing hand on heart) sighs again A Norse rugged God... this was like something right out of the poetic edda enjoyed |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Not only am I married to a Norseman, but a Scorpio...some woman have all the luck. Good to read you, Karen! |
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Edward Grim Senior Member
since 2005-12-18
Posts 1154Greenville, South Carolina |
I dig it. Gnarly writing Karen. Head Cheese & Chicken Feet |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Thanks so much for taking the time to read me. Your generosity is ever appreciated. Much love to you all.  |
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