Open Poetry #40 |
I Could Say I Love you |
Martie
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Posts 28049California |
I Could Say I Love you I could say you are my hero tell you of the bravery of each minute movement through the door of coming home careful consideration of small things laughter seeping into words of play the music of your thoughts in orchestration of the steadfast way that you begin the day I could say that I am new within your eyes and the promise of my vows delight me now for playful diligent percussion of the fun where I’ve passed the growl of neglect to find my new grown up silk gown I remember the song of our beginning questions paper wrapped and opening so much time to see the distance first was easy faster laughter now I see it gather gratitude with thirst That you hold me when I cry no tears is only one of many reason dear other is you grant me clumsy grace to discover the everlasting in my face |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
you just put the sacred back into sacrament. I WILL say I love you, sweet marite. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
But you did say "I love you" ~ and with so much grace. Your Valentine is very fortunate, indeed! ~ as as you! May Cupid's arrow always be slung straight and true! Happy Valentine's Day hug, Linda |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sissie... minute minutes are s and you know it! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I remember the song of our beginning questions paper wrapped and opening so much time to see the distance first was easy faster laughter now I see it gather gratitude with thirst That you hold me when I cry no tears is only one of many reason dear other is you grant me clumsy grace to discover the everlasting in my face by definition, a beauty secret for love, remarkably this was like listening to the cosmos Beautiful Martie |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MartieSis~ "I could say I love you" ... and you just did so BEAUTIFULLY~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie Happy Valentine my dear. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Lovely...simply lovely! Brought me a tear, it did. That's how a Valentine is supposed to be. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Martie you could say I love you or you could write a delicious poem that says it all beautiful work! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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Rod Member
since 1999-12-08
Posts 149Auckland New Zealand |
This is actually very deep....really well done! Thank you. Rod It is better to light a single candle than to curse the darkness. |
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DreamerSpirit Member
since 2006-10-02
Posts 240Buenos Aires, Argentina |
i read this one twice..to get the full feeling of it...i hope i can write like this someday!!.. Excellent Work!. |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
Martie - what a wonderful love you poem - I am sure Taylor said wow! Paul |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Oh, Martie, this is so very beautiful. It touches the heart, you know. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
How did I miss this beauty!??? Oh Martie...you say I love you beautifully! ~ Time has cast a spell on you, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
so glad I didn't miss this one of yours! |
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icequeen Senior Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 633FL USA |
One word - magnificent. You have such an elegant soul. Caroline He who wants a rose must respect the thorn. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Martie, I am glad I found this wonderful piece of yours! Your way of saying I love you is SPECIAL! Love, Margherita |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Truly beautiful and wonderful! |
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